Tuesday 17 September 2013

Nigerian Writer: Okoro (5) The Final Part

Felix Brambaifa
By Felix Brambaifa
 He cried, the tears fell and his voice was enough measurement of the grief within.  It no longer mattered what his supposed future in-laws would think so he cried out her name, as his tears laid emphasis on the reason why his life had become so sad. The compounds in the area gathered, their attention was the righteous sort and he narrated his woes with every single drop. Eventually their sympathy became audible.
  “Sorry, such is life, it will get better” Filled the air as the women tried to console him. Agnes who had been their beloved now became the Judas they all wanted to stone. But this was not the case with the males who could not conceal their annoyance at the foolishness of an old man, investing on a girl old enough only to be his granddaughter with the intention of marriage in mind. Some held back their irritation while others too angry at Okoro for misrepresenting men were bold to shout. “Old fool”
   The time came and even the night tired of an old man without shame went to sleep, he was left alone to nurse his wounds. Mama Agnes tried her best but he would not come inside for the night, for he had vowed to wait for Agnes to come back before business of that kind would find a place in his heart. But when the time became too lonely and his resolve almost lost to drowsiness he stood up and went to the outside road where the activities of nightlife were gradually taking shape.
 The bar played loud music, the prostitutes paraded themselves, and the crowd frolicking in their carnal pleasures paid little attention to morality as each of every one of them struggled to get the best out of the vanity the moment had on parade. He was among them, trying in his best efforts to kill his pains through too much alcohol, and it was then he saw the car come to a stop in front of the bar. Out came the heavily built guy and to the shocking surprise of Okoro there stood Agnes, beside him.
  They took a table for themselves and drinks were brought. They laughed, they discussed and Agnes was evidently happy with herself, not even worried about the so recent episode she had left still unfinished.
  He looked at her and wondered if she had no conscience, he had sent her to school, helped her family and for this alone he was entitled to her respect but which was never the case as Agnes was so always quick to show, He looked at her and could see the aura of an ingrate, he stood up and walked towards their table.
   She felt her head swell; she saw Okoro’s face and knew this time the trouble had come to stay. He dragged out the empty chair and sat down. He peered into the eyes of Tony who was so surprise at the uninvited guest that for a moment he remained speechless not knowing what road to take. Then he managed to speak.
 “What can I do for you?” Tony asked, expecting to hear the ranting of a drunk gone over the edge.
 “Young man you have insulted me” Said Okoro.
 Tony had expected it and so he laughed like a mad man before saying. “Ok I will buy you another drink”
  Okoro was angry as he replied. “I say I want my wife, she is my wife”
  Tony was silent as he looked towards Agnes.
  “That is the way he has been harassing me, an area drunk who would not leave me alone” Her denial was piercing to the soul and Okoro was again the victim.
  “Indeed I am an old fool” With this he began crying, heavily.
  Every man was created to partake in the ills of life but to be insulted in this manner, be denied by the one who have seen your best and charity was in many words the worse of bad times. He stood up and demanded that Agnes come with him. She declined and the madness which for hours had remained constrained finally caught fresh air and inhaled strength. He grabbed her hand and dragged her to her feet but Tony was there to pull back.
  He heard the bottle break but his anger would not listen.
 “She is not going anywhere” Tony countered, his voice angry as expected.
  He was tall; the type of fellow with strength to start a mini riot and come out victorious and in his clenched fist was the broken bottle waiting to prove itself. Okoro on the other hand had his age to be worried about, he was not at all fit for the moment but his anger would not relent.
  He went for Tony and in the suddenness of the moment the two of them fell. The bar gathered round, no hands went forward to do what was right, instead they stood, watching as Tony gave Okoro the beating of his life.
  She stood there silent as an untroubled night, but when the beating became more violent, she begged and Tony stood up, pleased with himself for beating his father’s age mate. If shame had never before been ashamed of itself, then Okoro certainly with this moment had allowed the impossible. Tony had refrained from using the bottle but yet blood covered the face of Okoro. He stood up crying, the loud music had since reached a forced end and so Okoro’s voice was as the crickets and frogs of the night. He walked out from the bar, his tail between his legs.
  The bar was back to its usual self when Okoro suddenly re-emerged. From where at that time of the night he had found himself a machete remained a mystery but nevertheless he came back with one in hand.
  He had not bothered informing her but left immediately for safety. She was surprised but when she looked behind, she understood why and followed her lover.
  She was the one who shouted the loudest, as Okoro pursued them into another street in the middle of the night, Tony joined her and in no time the atmosphere was reeling with. Thief! Thief!

      He could hear the footsteps gearing up to join strength. He saw the doors open, heard the sound of iron rods been dragged from their sleeping places by hands too hungry for violence but before his voice could put up his defense, that he was not a thief, a piece of block from behind, with full force to his head made contact and to the ground he fell. Even as he fell he had desperately wanted to explain but that piece of block was the Devil which in its cruelty had dislodged this ability, replacing them with pure pains.
   When events like this take the full stage, God in his mercies might interfere and the victim by miracle would survived, but for God to have involved himself would have been so unfair for never before had any one receive so much demonstrated fury and live to tell the tale.
  She shouted for them to stop but when the Devil sits on the saddle nothing was bound to go the normal mile. She cursed them, she went violent on most of them and since she was no stranger in her own neighborhood they did not return her violence as she took time to now explain “He is my husband”.
  But the crowd was just too much to cover with her little shouts, her sudden sense of remorse compared to the growling that was then the atmosphere was like the search of  grain of sand on sea shore.
   She was now bitterly crying, they had by this time relaxed their angry violence and knelt by his body calling out amidst falling tears. “Okoro! Okoro! Come back, I am ready, come back!”
   But it was already passed the hour of grace and needing not a doctor they all knew that he was no longer with them. She cried, she begged for his return but Okoro was finally on that journey into the great beyond where God or Satan must have to punish him for been so stupid.

                                                                                 The End


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